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Schoolchildren are to be encouraged to pledge allegiance to the queen and promise to obey the law in ceremonies similar to those for new immigrants.
Lord Goldsmith will say this procedure could strengthen children's understanding of what it means to be British.
One idea is that those ceremonies for immigrants to be held in schools where children could also take part or in other public places (art galleries...) (Une idée est que ces ceremonies pour les immigrants puissent se tenir dans les ecoles où les enfants pourront aussi y prendre part ..)
According to Gordon brown, this procedure is designed to help immigrants and citizens develop a shared sense of belonging.
Moreover it recommends immigrants to have mentors to teach them British customs .
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