Bonjour,
 
Pourriez vous m'aider a corriger ce que j'ai fais en anglais car mon anglais n'est pas très bon ..
 
Merci!
 
Hong Kong's natural environment has been gradually degrading.  
One of the main issues is the deterioration of the air quality which causes thousands of deaths every year. The pollution level is so high that a light smog blurs the view of skyscrapers, "la visibilité est devenue très mauvaise". Many locals leave their country because of these issues.
 
Improve the air quality is the first objective of the government. For that, several measurements have been taken. The main is to change individual behaviour. Thus, for example, managers have to turn up the thermostats on their air-conditioning, and drivers to turn off idling car engines .

Hong Kong's natural environment has been gradually worsening.  
One of the main issues is the deterioration of the air quality which causes thousands of deaths every year. The pollution level is so high that a light smog blurs the view of skyscrapers, visibility has been getting really poor. Many locals leave their country because of these issues.  
 
Improving the air quality is the first objective of the government. To achieve that, several actions have been taken. The main one is to change individual behaviours. For instance, office managers have been asked to turn up their AC thermostats' and car drivers to turn off their idling engines.

Bonjour !  
J'ai un travail de vacance en anglais pour lequel je dois faire le resume de 4textes. Pour le reussir au mieux, pouvez vous m'aider a les corriger ? Merci beaucoup d'avance !  
 
Voici le premier resumé:
 
Francais:
Bien que certains d’américains gardent beaucoup d’appréhensions concernant la peine de mort. Elle est toujours de mise dans beaucoup d’états..
Cependant suite a plusieurs a annulation comme celle de Willaim Castiollo qui fut innocente juste avant son exécution grâce a un test ADN, crée débat a propos de la égalité de cette pratique qui consiste a injecter un produit puis un deuxième ainsi qu’un troisième pour masqué les effets des 2er donnant l’impression que le prisonnier ne souffre pas. C’est pourquoi des procès on été ouvert au Texas et on Kentucky. Ils demandent une reforme de la loi sur l’application de cette peine ainsi qu’un élargissement de celle-ci pour les récidivistes et les pédophiles. Jusqu'à ce que cette reforme sois prise, toute les peine de mort sont suspendues.
D'autre part  Anita Dunn soutenue par le gouverneur républicain de Illinois demande l'abolition de cette peine.
 
Anglais:
Although lots of Americans retain some misgivings about the death penalty. It is still appropriate in many states.
However following more cancellations like William Castillo that he had been cleared just before his excution, creates debate about the legality of this practic, which involves injecting a product and then a second and a third to hide the effects of the first two giving the impression that the prisoner does not suffer.. Therefore Some cases have been opened in Texas and Kentucky. they demand a reform of the law on the application of capital punishment and a elagant of this one torecidivistent and pedophiles. Until this reform, all death penalty is suspended.
Moreover Anita Dunn supported by the Republican governor of Illinois called for the abolition of the death penalty.