Hello ,j'ai un problème car j'ai un expo pour mardi j'ai fait mon travail et je l'ai fait voir a ma prof de renforcer elle m'a dit que ça n'aller pas au niveau du plan, que c'est tro long ,que j'avais trop pris de bloc (une sorte de copier/coller) et que je devais intégrer avec mes propres mots pour que les autres éléves me comprennent ce que j'ai fait pourtant mais en vain car il fo que je reformule les phrases, remplacer les adverbes et faire des phrases plus simples pour, comme je le disais , les autres éléves me comprennent.
voila mon sujet et mon devoir (en n'oubliant pas que c'est un exposer a l'oral):
Red Hot Chili Peppers
The Red Hot Chili Peppers are a Californian Los Angeles-based band birthed from the Rock / Funk-Rock movement of the late 1980s and early 1990s. The Peppers have gone on to further diversify their sound adding elements of ska, jazz, psychedelia,and blues to their songwriting. Vocalist Anthony Kiedis, bassist Michael Balzary (better known as Flea), guitarist Hillel Slovak, and drummer Jack Irons formed the band in 1983.
Well known for their drug use and their numerous line up changes, the current line up features Kiedis, Flea, guitarist John Frusciante, and drummer Chad Smith. Past members in addition to Slovak and Irons include Jack Sherman, Cliff Martinez, Dwayne "Blackbird" McKnight, D.H. Peligro, Arik Marshall, Jesse Tobias, and Dave Navarro. The Red Hot Chili Peppers have eight studio albums (their ninth, the long awaited double-album Stadium Arcadium to be released in Spring 2006), eight #1 modern rock hits, and sold nearly 50 million copies of their albums worldwide. Originally signed to a record deal by EMI in 1983, they switched to Warner Brothers Records in 1991 and they have been with them since. Past producers include Andy Gill who produced their debut album, George Clinton who produced Freaky Styley, and Michael Beinhorn who produced The Uplift Mofo Party Plan and Mother's Milk. Rick Rubin produced Blood Sugar Sex Magik and every album thereafter.
Sound Philosophy
The Red Hot Chili Peppers are mainly known for two things: Flea's powerful bass and their diverse musical precision.
Flea's bass styles lie in punk rock traditions and in funk and blues, borrowing mainly from the likes of Bootsy Collins of Parliament-Funkadelic and John Paul Jones of Led Zeppelin. His bass is typically the lead instrument and sets the rhythm of the Peppers songs. The groove heavy, low tuned melodies, composed through either normal strumming, slapping, or picking, has made for memorable bass riffs throughout the Peppers musical catalogue.
The guitar, although styles differing amongst the four guitarists that recorded albums for the Peppers -- Frusciante, Slovak, Navarro, and Sherman -- more times than not did not completely overpower Flea's bass. They all shared traits of Jimi Hendrix, a distorted, yet sharp guitar with strong range. However, the similarities end there. Sherman's guitar was the driest and the most distorted of the four, but he was mainly trying to stay as close as possible to Hillel Slovak's original style - most of the songs he recorded with the band had been composed with Slovak; Slovak based his guitar solely in heavier aspects blues and funk; Frusciante brought along more melodies, texture, and depth; and Navarro arguably brought along a style based in heavy metal and psychedelia. Sherman also added guitar solos to many of the earlier work of the Chili Peppers.
During the early years, original member Jack Irons and replacement Cliff Martinez played drums, although Chad Smith has been with the band continuously since the late 80s. In his audition he blew the band away with an energetic, chaotic jam, which is said to have taken Flea by surprise and have Chad yelling at him to keep up. Smith was later accredited as one of the premier rock drummers in the world after the release of Blood Sugar Sex Magik.
Kiedis is one of the most diverse vocalists in rock with his wide range of vocal styles which give the band an identity and a sense of familiarity. His untraditional rapping (with the melody rather than the beat), spoken verse (characteristic of his vocals up to Blood Sugar Sex Magik), and singing (which has improved drastically since Freaky Styley) add another dimension to a Peppers song.
The band is unique by being the first rock band in the world to fuse punk and funk, or "White sound" with "Black sound", way before Aerosmith and Run DMC featured "Walk this way", although there were already white hip-hop bands in the early 1980's, such as The Beastie Boys. In fact, "Walk this way" bears a strong resemblance to the RHCP's song "fight like a brave" from their 1987 album The Uplift Mofo Party Plan and might've been influence by the latter. Back in 1987 their sound was considered "unusual", hence the marketing problems regarding Freaky Styley. The band's most prominent contribution to the rock world would be crossing-over to both white and black audience and making rap music more attractive and plausible to white audience. Even though most fans don't know much about the formative years of the RHCPs in the '80s, it was the backbone of their much-more-renown work from the '90s and 2000s.
Thanks to you May be I will succed !Merci à vous j'aimerais l'avoir si possible avant 1h du mat ce soir (je c c tard mais j'arrive plus a me coucher avant) pour le montrer a ma prof d'anglais et non pas de renforcer celle qui m'a aider donc merci encore et que la paix soit avec vous!