Bonjour, Alors voici la correction que je te propose (ce que je met en gras c'est ce que j'ai changé) :
MARION: Next, Miss Johnson come in please!
CHARLENE: Good morning madame!
M: Sit down please. Welcome to my restaurant, The ........(il faut que je trouve un nom de restaurant) I saw your CV, it's very interesting but I want to know more about you. So why do you want to become a cook ?
C:When I was ten years old, I decided to create the best chocolate cake in the world. So, I made it and my mother loved it !!! That's when I knew what I wanted to do: become the biggest cook to make people happy awakening their sens of taste. (cela est incorrect)
M: Really? That's an interesting story. If I understand, you have discovered this passion for cooking when you were very young. According to me, this passion for a job is very important. Now, I would you to tell me about your professional experience.
C: When I have graduated from the university of New York, I took a gap year in Paris for six months in order to learn cooking with ......(il faut que je trouve un nom de chef) It was fantastic. Now, I have more experience because he has taught me a lot of things.
M :I would like to know why do you want to work in my restaurant. Why did you choose mine ? and did you go to another restaurant to ask for a job ?
C : No because my choice was already made because your retaurant is the biggest and the best restaurant of the United States for me. That's why it's the only restaurant where I wanted to work. So I decided to make everything to seize the opportunity to enter in your restaurant and I would be proud if I do that.
M : Also, you know that the job of cooking is very physical and when you make anything, you are the responsable. You can create new flavours and all what you want. But be carreful, it has to agree with the customers. You have to be sure of yourself. Moreover you will make menus which will change every month to attract the customers who are looking for diversity. It will be your role if you are hired. Would you be ready to do that...?
C : Yes! It's exactly what I want to do. I would be ready to begin now if you told me to
M: No problem, can you make a menu for me please? (elle tend une feuille et un stylo)
C : Of course,one moment please... (elle écrit, rature et tend sa feuille)
M : Mmmmh, yeah, it's quiet good. So tell me about your weaknesses.
C: As you can see that my menu is not very good but if I have a little more time, I can right an excellent menu. Moreover I'm sometimes hungry when I see someone who is making a bad work, because I want that everything to be perfect.
M:Right. Do you have any questions before we finish this interview ?
C:Yes. Can you tell me about working hours and the salary please?
M: Of course! For working hours, you will have the details if you are hired. The salary is 2000 pounds ]every month, for the beggining. And if you are serious and motivated, a promotion is possible.
C: Thanks, that's very interesting.
M: You are welcome !So the interview is finished and maybe I will be intouch with you soon!
C: I hope to hear from you very soon. Thank you very much and have a good day!
M :Have a good day too. Next! Mr Robinson please !
Voila, Apart quelques fautes , je trouve que c'est un bon travail 
Bonne chance a l'oral
